Sunday, September 20, 2009

To Mrs Moon (regarding college essays)

with the amount of corrections you made in my paper, and the explanations and words that come along with efficiently making those corrections, i find my paper stretching over the limit of 500, and almost impossible to edit and cut down without missing the whole idea i am trying to convey, or to comfortably have a paper that shows corrections to all the points you have made.
so i ask you to take that into consideration when grading my paper, and i would like alert you that such essays that have such a small frame, not only limit creativity, but efficiency.

Thank You

3 comments:

Julian said...

i do realize that this might be a personal problem regarding the topic i chose.

Julian said...

i also realize that it is just this prompt, and i am complaining.
but i am aggravated.

Mrs. Moon said...

Well, don't forget that I didn't set the word count...the University of Michigan did. (ha ha). Don't worry if it's exactly 500 words--just get it close!

Take a deep breath--you'll be fine.