College Essay/ senior project

Hey Mrs. Moon.
I have rewritten my college essay according to the advice that we talked about, however I wanted to make sure that it was what we were discussing and that I followed your suggestions. I was wondering if you could re look over it tomorrow in class or via e-mail. I will probably check this before school tomorrow so let me know!

Secondly, i have been doing my note cards for senior project and am finding basic information which is going to give me a good start. But I wanted to see if you had any other sites or suggestions for more in depth information. I actually went on to the site that the Librarians gave us ( yes, i actually paid attention) but the sources that they gave me did not really seem to benefit much. I don't know, maybe i am doing it wrong....
Anyways, if you had any suggestions, they would be greatly accepted.

Thanks so much

Kathryn

p.s. I know that i missed class, after talking to sarah, it did not seem like i missed to much, besides paraphrasing, and sourcing stuff.. but if there is anything else that i did miss, please let me know.