Monday, October 12, 2009

word choice...

can anyone think of a better word for venture in this sentance it seems to positive of a word to talk about cancer...


The patient starts his/her venture with chemotherapy, nausea, chronic pain, and emotional stress as an everyday occurrence.

2 comments:

sarah said...

oh yeaH and mrs moon how did you say i was supposed to make the word yourself okay in this sentance?

Some of the basics of what is taught to patients is to live life completely: accept and forgive, self discovery: place and purpose in life, love yourself: disease and all, nurture relationships: connect with others and feel less alone, and focus thoughts: pray, meditate, and relax

Mrs. Moon said...

You need to put it in quotes--so find the actual quote and use their wording.

And the above sentence doesn't really make sense as is; it's not just the word "venture."